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18 December Birches
The recent ice storm has reminded me of one of my all-time favorite poems... BirchesTruly an unbelievable poem which you can read and re-read throughout the years. 23 October Who ate the plums in the icebox?Whenever I read mw.hassles I am of course sympathetic to those who have had their lunch eaten from the refrigerator -- that's just harsh to find out someone ate your food; but, it also sometimes brings a smile to my face because I think of this poem I read so very long ago by WIlliam Carlos Williams ... This is just to sayI took a course a Modern Poetry in college and I have to say I didn't do that well; I just couldn't connect with modern poetry the way I could with regular poetry or english literature. But since then, I have come to like modern poetry a little more. I've read all sorts of critical analysis of this poem...it's about fallability, forgiveness, the human condition. Yeah, maybe. But why I really like this poem is because it reminds me of when I ..once...metaphorically...ate the plums in the icebox. About 10 years ago...my mother...then 70+ years old...had a computer problem. This is the bain of my existence...relatives and neighbors know I work with computers and they continually thrust their computer problems on me -- mouse is broken, can't connect to AOL, printer is not working, etc... apparently they have it in their heads that I can ...and want to...fix all their computer problems. My mother, bless her soul, how I don't know, changed her monitor display to some invalid setting so that as soon as you turn the computer on I could hear it reboot...but the monitor was blank. Totally blank. She called me up to fix this. I went over to her house dutifully, turned the computer on, saw the blank screen, and was perplexed. I did this a few more times...tried hitting F5 or F10 during the reboot...nothing...blank screen. I said Mom I can't fix this. She said it was important that I do so, she had to read a joke email that one of her retired friends sent her as well as get her daily horoscope and sudoko. So I called my friend Rich. Rich is the wizard of all things Windows. I explained to Rich the situation and he said ...give me an hour. He called me back within an hour and gave me a step by step sequence of keystrokes....Windows button, up arrow 4 times, left arrow, left arrow, down arrow, return, return, ...this series of keystrokes was about 437 steps long...and I went over to my mother's house to give it a try. I couldn't believe it...but I did all 437 steps...in order, carefully....rebooted...and holy cow....the monitor was restored. The horoscope and sudoku crisis was averted. My mother...to thank Rich...baked him an apple pie. And then she gave me the pie to give to Rich. When she handed me the pie, it was still warm. I love my mother's homemade apple pies, and when she gave it to me I was conflicted. This pie was for Rich. A small piece of the crust ...dry and flaky...fell off in my hand when I was putting the pie in the car. It was just a small loose piece of crust...and I didn't want it to dirty the car...so I thought it would be OK if I ate that one little piece of loose crust. I did, and it was good, dry and flaky like I thought. And 5 minutes later about 1/4 of the pie was gone. Mea culpa, mea culpa... Rich and I are good friends, and I gave the pie to Rich, sans the missing 1/4, and we laughed and laughed about this. "Dude, I totally understand" he said...and I joined him for another slice. So this is what I think of when I read that poem, or read mw.hassles.... 10 March What have I done worthwhile?Here's a small piece of poetry ....easy to read...but thought provoking... A drink in a bar by Jan Osman It was a hot evening and into the long, narrow bar walked a dove with a broken wing. It walked the length of the bar to where beer crates were stacked seeking shelter in dark recesses. I told the barman and together we walked over and he picked up the bird, there were other drinkers but no one seemed to have noticed the drama, he put the bird on a ledge outside and said. It hasn’t got a [f****g] chance” and back in we went to continue the serious business of drinking. The thought of the bird didn’t leave me so after a few more drinks I went outside to have a look and found two healthy doves pushing the crippled one off the ledge, they succeeded and the invalid fell to the ground I picked it up and it died in my hands. Buried it in a waste bin full of [cigarette] packs and greasy chippy paper and went into the bar for another drink. In this drama of death, which no one will ever remember, I did feel as I had done something worthwhile. This situation reminds me of many things...family, work, being a parent, etc... The outcome of your actions is not always certain, sometimes the dove cannot be saved, sometimes you do not effect the desired result in the world. This is out of your control. What is in your control is how you act and carry yourself in these situations. What is it that he did that was worthwhile? Nothing really is different because of his actions. The dove is dead, he did not save it. I think what he did that was worthwhile was that he acted with sensistivity, compassion, and respect. 29 February UphillToday's poem analysis is ....
Uphill
The poem is a conversation between 2 people. The 1st person asks a question on 1 line, and the 2nd person answers the question on the 2nd line. This pattern of question and response holds for the entire poem. The identity of these 2 people is probably the first part of understanding this poem. The person asking the questions is the person the reader identifies with. So the 1st person is "us". The identity of the 2nd person is not so clear. Perhaps someone more experienced. Perhaps someone who has finished the journey already. In the first stanza, the "road" is the journey of life. That the road "winds up-hill" are the struggles, suffering, trials, and strife that everyone endures. The second stanza starts in on the end of the road...the resting place. Death? Heaven? Take your pick. But you cannot miss this resting place. It is unavoidable. The third stanza talks about others at the inn..."those who have gone before." It is not that complicated a poem to understand. For me it is the question and answer format that adds interest, as well as some of the wording and phrasing. Take for instance the last stanza...."Shall I comfort?" ...the answer of "Of labour you shall find the sum." is interesting enough that I have re-read this at least a dozen times to try and understand the meaning. The comfort you find is equal to the labour you have done? The comfort of other's labour? All in all, it is a rather comforting poem, as the person asking question is comforted, so is the reader. "Yea, beds for all who come." 28 February A Noiseless Patient SpiderToday's poem, with analysis, is one by Walt Whitman .... A NOISELESS PATIENT SPIDER by Walt Whitman A noiseless, patient spider, I mark'd where on a little promontory it stood isolated, Mark'd how to explore the vacant vast surrounding, It launch'd forth filament, filament, filament, out of itself, Ever unreeling them, ever tirelessly speeding them. And you O my soul where you stand, Surrounded, detached, in measureless oceans of space, Ceaselessly musing, venturing, throwing, seeking the spheres to xxxxxconnect them, Till the bridge you will need be form'd, till the ductile anchor hold, Till the gossamer thread you fling catch somewhere, O my soul. Well....easy to understand in some regards: the spider, oddly enough, is an analogy for the human soul...and the literary technique at work is one of imagery. The spider/human_soul reaches out to make connections in the outside world. The spider, and human soul...both noiseless, patient, seeking, trying to build connections. It is the building of these connections, that construct, that is the endeavor. Not an easy task. Filament after filament launched into nothingness. Until one finds a connection, takes hold, and then the web and construction can begin. Relationships. Work. Other? 07 March The RobinA poem by Emily Dickinson about the robin, a harbinger of spring....
With hurried, few, express reports The robin is the one That speechless from her nest Submits that home and certainty And sanctity are best.
This poem reminds me of Robert Frost ....some simple observations of nature that cleverly lead to some bigger conclusion. The verb phrases associated with the robin at the beginning of each stanza...."interrupts the morn", and "overflows the noon" ...interests me. And the months mentioned....March and April...that is when we really notice the robin. Nothing complicated; yet still interesting. 15 January BirchesBit of sleet last night, and when it accumulates on the trees it always reminds me of Robert Frost's poem...
Birches Robert Frost (1874–1963) WHEN I see birches bend to left and right Across the lines of straighter darker trees, I like to think some boy’s been swinging them. But swinging doesn’t bend them down to stay. Ice-storms do that. Often you must have seen them Loaded with ice a sunny winter morning After a rain. They click upon themselves As the breeze rises, and turn many-colored As the stir cracks and crazes their enamel. Soon the sun’s warmth makes them shed crystal shells, Shattering and avalanching on the snow-crust— Such heaps of broken glass to sweep away You’d think the inner dome of heaven had fallen. They are dragged to the withered bracken by the load, And they seem not to break; though once they are bowed So low for long, they never right themselves: You may see their trunks arching in the woods Years afterwards, trailing their leaves on the ground Like girls on hands and knees that throw their hair Before them over their heads to dry in the sun. But I was going to say when Truth broke in With all her matter-of-fact about the ice-storm (Now am I free to be poetical?) I should prefer to have some boy bend them As he went out and in to fetch the cows— Some boy too far from town to learn baseball, Whose only play was what he found himself, Summer or winter, and could play alone. One by one he subdued his father’s trees By riding them down over and over again Until he took the stiffness out of them, And not one but hung limp, not one was left For him to conquer. He learned all there was To learn about not launching out too soon And so not carrying the tree away Clear to the ground. He always kept his poise To the top branches, climbing carefully With the same pains you use to fill a cup Up to the brim, and even above the brim. Then he flung outward, feet first, with a swish, Kicking his way down through the air to the ground. So was I once myself a swinger of birches. And so I dream of going back to be. It’s when I’m weary of considerations, And life is too much like a pathless wood Where your face burns and tickles with the cobwebs Broken across it, and one eye is weeping From a twig’s having lashed across it open. I’d like to get away from earth awhile And then come back to it and begin over. May no fate willfully misunderstand me And half grant what I wish and snatch me away Not to return. Earth’s the right place for love: I don’t know where it’s likely to go better. I’d like to go by climbing a birch tree, And climb black branches up a snow-white trunk TOWARD heaven, till the tree could bear no more, But dipped its top and set me down again. That would be good both going and coming back. One could do worse than be a swinger of birches. 19 December Planting GingerI find in my backpocket a page torn from the Boston Globe from perhaps a month or more ago. I usually never read the obituaries, but I had time to kill and only a few sections of the Globe to read at this particular coffee shop. I read the intriguing obituary of Dr. Dhristine Luthra, 55, poet, homepath, photographer.
A fascinating obituary, and just a glimpse at a fascinating person. Just a few ssnippets:
Two poems.
Touch Your Face If I were going to die or you, I would want to touch your face with my eyes closed the way the beautiful blind child did
and,
Planting Ginger I too, wish a hand would pull over me a rich blanket of warm and loose earth and give me a place of lovely darkness, a place to sing very old melodies, a place to cherish the lineage of life 25 October Java Programming HaikuSubmitted by a friend, RK.....a Java programming haiku: In the morning The build is dead, or so it seems Quite regularly 02 October Greatly anticipating the release of "War Thoughts At Home" by Robert FrostThe recent discovery of a previously unpublished Robert Frost poem is greatly anticipated by many, myself among them. This excellent NPR article on War Thoughts sets the stage nicely.
The first two stanzas here:
Just have to be patient a little more now to see where he goes with this...and to see any relevance to today's situation. My guess: he is timeless in his observations and wisdom.....
14 September Poetry of TupacInteresting website of the poetry of Tupac... here's one.... Liberty Needs Glasses excuse me but lady liberty needs glasses and so does mrs justice by her side both the broads r blind as bats stumbling thru the system justice bumbed into mutulu and trippin on geronimo pratt but stepped right over oliver and his crooked partner ronnie justice stubbed her big toe on mandela and liberty was misquoted by the indians slavery was a learning phase forgotten with out a verdict while justice is on a rampage 4 endangered surviving black males i mean really if anyone really valued life and cared about the masses theyd take em both 2 pen optical and get 2 pair of glasses I got the idea to look at they lyrics of Tupac when I was looking at Yahoo Buzz! which mentioned that celebrities come and go, but Tupac has staying power. I don't listen to much rap, so I thought I'd try and find his lyrics online...and read some lyrics..and discovered he has some poetry as well. Very interesting reading, there was one piece on Vincent Van Gogh that had some fascinating insight. There's some good stuff. ![]() 19 August The Poetry of David WilliamsThe Worcester Magazine had an interview with a local poet named David Williams. It was a semi-interesting interview, but left me wanting more. How can you interview a poet without including a poem, or mentioning one of their works? So I Google'd him and found what I was looking for. There is an audio interview on Arab World which includes several author-read poems, as well as an audio interview. His earlier work is titled "Travelling Mercies", and here is one poem from that work ... Seeds and NamesCedar cones open and drop sweet seeds
from their tongues like the names of God. Old men finger their beads and repeat the one name of God that still burns through their shock - whole families gone, whole neighborhoods gone and plowed over, arms blown off flew up against desecration, the roots of a great tree clawing the air. Now the children’s hair is falling out to mark the absence trapped in them, mute. Their mothers pour out a measure of lentils for everyone there, and pour an empty cup for those who are gone, as if to write their names on the air. They pick out each measure with their palms, pick out gravel and stems, and sweep it into the cooking pot with an echoing clatter like the names of God. (Lebanon) I like the metaphor of the many seeds of the cedar cone .... all different names of God...emanating from the same place. And the image of the seeds carrying through the old man counting rosary beads, seeds of lentils going into the soup, and into the cooking pot. ![]() 13 July Where are the Shelley's of today?An interesting article in the London Times on some newly found poetry of Percy Bysshe Shelley ...
As I read the Times article, I am at first startled the historical context, Shelley's political activism in his poetry, as well as the governmental squelching of dissent. As an English literature major, I knew this, but seem to have forgotten.
Ozymandis has been a favorite poem of mine. Accessible. And it is quick to reread his other poetry... poems of love, despair, oppression, politics.
Modern poetry has never really appealed to me. But where and who are the Shelley's of today? Anyone?
22 May RiskRisk by Anais Nin And then the day came, when the risk to remain tight in a bud was more painful than the risk it took to Blossom. An interesting poem by Anais Nin, more known for her tasteful erotic and highly personal writing. There is the metaphor of the bud and flower...like a Georgia O' Keefe painting...does not require too much to figure out this imagery....common in her writing. What she describes is interesting...when it is appropriate from a balance of pain perspective ....to blossom....when the chance of winning and losing...compels one to a more risky position. 31 March Poem of the Day: Mad Girl's Love Song by Sylvia PlathToday's poem of the day (with analysis)...is...
As for the analysis...I confess I have difficulty with some modern poetry....this being one. But...here goes... The structure of this poem is not that popular, and is a villanelle ,which is a structure of only 2 repeating rhymes. Why this structure? The structure lends itself to: 1) introduction, development, conclusion, 2) duality, dichotomy, debate, 3) obsession. Here...I think we are dealing with obsession. Obsession of love...or first love...or imaginary love. The repeating lines
...are the obsession. Consumed by this love...real or imagined.
"Mad" has two meanings....mad as in crazy. Mad as in angry. I think there is more crazy than angry in the meaning, but I am sure Sylvia Plath chose the word for a reason. If all she wanted was crazy in meaning, this would be Crazy Girl's Love Song. So we have crazy...and anger. Anger at unrequited love? Frustration? Just multiple conflicting strong emotions?
Just a poem about consuming, obsessive, unrequited, love. I think the poem works.
21 March How to Read A PoemVery interesting online resources at http://aspirations.english.cam.ac.uk/converse/alevel/englishlanguage.acds ....
How to read a poem ... http://aspirations.english.cam.ac.uk/converse/alevel/poetry.acds and improve poem reading and close reading skills.... http://aspirations.english.cam.ac.uk/converse/alevel/studyskills.acds
16 March Let America Be America AgainAn interesting poem by Langston Hughes. The puzzle for me is the word "again". The reality of America never *was* the dream of America in the first place. Paradox. It's the dream of America that Hughes writes of ...wants again.
13 March Two poems from a Worcester poetI recently stumbled across the poetry of Stanley Kunitz, who was born and raised in Worcester Massachusetts. Stanley Kunitz eventually became recognized as one of our nation's Poet Laureates, one of the highest honors for a poet. I never knew this.
One of his poems, The Testing-Tree, references streets and neighborhoods familiar to me, and as I read it I recognize not only the specific geographical references, but also the writing of someone who grew up in the blue-collar mill city filled with 3-decker neighborhoods.
10 March in Just-A spring poem by e. e. cummings.....
02 March The Road Not TakenAn easy to understand poem, and a good one. About the choices we make in life...
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